tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.comments2016-10-19T19:23:45.272-04:00Dwight D WadeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09540695170422833518noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-77535544415358929452016-10-19T19:23:45.272-04:002016-10-19T19:23:45.272-04:00Excellent Storytelling - Leaves the Reader wanting...Excellent Storytelling - Leaves the Reader wanting to Know More and in Short Form with the use of a flashback technique - well done SirDRJWSAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708579096097255530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-67935265445899061182013-09-21T21:55:15.765-04:002013-09-21T21:55:15.765-04:00The best writers make up their own words - all tha...The best writers make up their own words - all that matters is that they know what it means! hahaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-89093580745209260462013-09-17T07:47:42.064-04:002013-09-17T07:47:42.064-04:00Because everything is better when narrated by Sam ...Because everything is better when narrated by Sam Elliott!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09540695170422833518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-28995142870117469192013-09-16T21:11:55.089-04:002013-09-16T21:11:55.089-04:00Love it. Why does my internal monologue sorta sou...Love it. Why does my internal monologue sorta sound like Sam Eliott when I read this?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12358306850043930002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-31162370495673380742013-09-16T07:40:19.538-04:002013-09-16T07:40:19.538-04:00Thanks Dan! I am always interested in feedback an...Thanks Dan! I am always interested in feedback and I appreciate both the kind words and the constructive idea. Glad you enjoyed it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09540695170422833518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-5176418753405982952013-09-15T22:02:00.367-04:002013-09-15T22:02:00.367-04:00I'm just happy that I don't live there.I'm just happy that I don't live there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-21055194779761111132013-09-15T21:46:05.635-04:002013-09-15T21:46:05.635-04:00Your story sucked me in right away. It has all of...Your story sucked me in right away. It has all of the elements of that a short story should have, and does most of them well. I think you could develop the character a little more. Who are these visitors (obviously ET's of some kind), but why are they stopping by earth every 200 years? Where have they been? Are they themselves on a some sort of exploratory mission looking for more Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12358306850043930002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-17651683138600235672013-07-30T21:32:55.611-04:002013-07-30T21:32:55.611-04:00rock on, dwight!! *parking ramp cheering*rock on, dwight!! *parking ramp cheering*madjeepgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16198873012160032883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-101316239647081042013-07-30T21:05:12.648-04:002013-07-30T21:05:12.648-04:00Good stuff, Dwight. Keep it up.Good stuff, Dwight. Keep it up.Jan S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04394040116678440613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-83567353626957716362013-06-25T06:03:23.842-04:002013-06-25T06:03:23.842-04:00Dude, you should write a follow up of all of our g...Dude, you should write a follow up of all of our gaming sessions. Everyone who played Saturday said the same thing: they were so geeked to play and had an amazing time. We were all transported to our youth. Unafraid and unashamed, we all assumed our roles and played as adventurers and Dungeon Master for a few hours. I can't wait to do it again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com