tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post4849571159415454336..comments2016-10-19T19:23:45.272-04:00Comments on Dwight D Wade: The VisitorsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09540695170422833518noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-31162370495673380742013-09-16T07:40:19.538-04:002013-09-16T07:40:19.538-04:00Thanks Dan! I am always interested in feedback an...Thanks Dan! I am always interested in feedback and I appreciate both the kind words and the constructive idea. Glad you enjoyed it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09540695170422833518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-5176418753405982952013-09-15T22:02:00.367-04:002013-09-15T22:02:00.367-04:00I'm just happy that I don't live there.I'm just happy that I don't live there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1035190064886553237.post-21055194779761111132013-09-15T21:46:05.635-04:002013-09-15T21:46:05.635-04:00Your story sucked me in right away. It has all of...Your story sucked me in right away. It has all of the elements of that a short story should have, and does most of them well. I think you could develop the character a little more. Who are these visitors (obviously ET's of some kind), but why are they stopping by earth every 200 years? Where have they been? Are they themselves on a some sort of exploratory mission looking for more Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12358306850043930002noreply@blogger.com